First, you have attached datum anchors directly to center lines. This is a big no-do in all dimensioning and tolerance standards. Datum can only be established from physical or real features not proposed center lines. Even though it may be obvious where the feature is that one would establish the datum from we don’t ever attach datum anchors to center lines.
Items missing:
- You don’t specify size tolerances for some of the features of size.
- Dimensioning and tolerancing standard is not specified (ASME Y14,5-2009 or ISO 1101-2009).
- Material used
Below, is a quick marked up version of your drawing to my best guess of design intent.